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Gently, the winds blow
on what would be
another fall eve.
Right now, I could be cold.
But that is not, what he told.
He held me tight,
his face, barely seen in light.
He watches me...
Protects me...
Giving me that sense of security
Which I hope lasts for eternity.
caring, guarding, comforting.
Our love is true, our souls are one.

Softly, he speaks
in that very voice
that makes me rejoice.
The loyalty I can see in his eyes
clear blue, just like the skies.
I never leave his sight,
knowing he would protect me with his might.
With him, I am never afraid
as he will be around to aid.
amazing, ensuring, enjoying.
Our love is true, our souls are one.

Fate made what this is
For forever, I am his.
He is also mine,
which is ever so fine.
We no longer worry of our pasts,
never worrying what life casts.
We shall always be together
even through the roughest weather.
His embrace keeps me warm
during the fiercest of storms.
We enter a loving kiss
one that is always pure bliss.
The future looks bright
with no end in sight.
We are here
with a love to revere.

True love...an incredible force...bringing two people together, bonding their souls in warm embrace for eternity.
©2008-2009 ~GameFreak38
:icongamefreak38:

Author's Comments

I wanted to do something for Valentine's Day, so here it is.:)

A poem written in the perspective of Laura as she reflects on her love with Midnight. More practice with rhyming, but this was mostly done in boredom.;)

Midnight, Laura, poem (c) me

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:iconredtnt:
Urgh...soppy romantic poetry makes me ill...:D Nah, I really like this, great use of language and deliverance.

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:icongamefreak38:
lol. Thanks:)

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:iconlostsoulmalachi:
^^ :aww: Very nice! This poem is so precious!

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:iconlexprower:
wow that's awesome. I was wondering what I could write for V-Day, and I guess a poem through Pyra's or any one of my character's eyes would be awesome. Or even in fact... what if I do it through a few of my villains? :evillaugh:
:iconlexprower:
by the way, did you know that was extremely romantic? To do that out of boredom, that seriously rocks ^^
:icongamefreak38:
Thanks!:D

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No matter how bad things get, never give up and never surrender!
:icongamefreak38:
Heh, that is up to you.

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No matter how bad things get, never give up and never surrender!
:iconlexprower:
Well I already posted up a preview, I just finished the real thing, I'm about to post it now (on Blue Potion)
:iconlenodonnel:
Trully a great poem. You delivered your message very well. I got lost in it for a second XD And it was done out or boredome too! I could only imagime what you would have done if you weren't bored!! Nice job :D

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"There's no place for emotion on the battlefield. Stay cool, follow orders, and eliminate the enemy. That’s all we have to do." -Gage, Advance Wars: DOR

:heart:~SarahViolin + :star:=Chibi-Gardevoir X craziness = END OF THE WORLD!!! XD

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